Wednesday, October 8, 2014

September Writing Celebration

We Celebrated our "Best Work" from September.
The students chose the work from their folder that they thought was their best.
At the celebration, they needed to say what their story was about and what they were proud of. Here is their work and comments.


 There is a deer on the roof and the dog is barking at it. I am proud of the deer.
 I made a starfish. I am proud of the dots.

 It is red. It has arms. I am proud of the starfish.

 I went to the water and saw a starfish. I am proud of my illustration.

 My dad caught a fish and I was happy. I am proud of my words.

 A red star fish. I am proud of the arms.

 I made mat man. I am proud of my words.

 My story is about a pink starfish. I am proud of my name.

 It is Luigi. I am proud of my illustration.

 I made a starfish. I am proud of my starfish.

 Me going to the beach with the hot sun. I am proud of the rainbow sun.


 I built a tree house. I am proud of my name and illustration.




When I go on my balance beam. I am proud of my name.

 
A blue starfish. I am proud that it is blue


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